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Needs better drums...

The drum set you used there is too weakç. Try adding something stronger.

It's cool.

There are some parts that doesn't seem to fit, but other than that, the song is great!

Need better beats.

Your rythm is good, but the beats kinda ruined it all. The kick is almoust inaudible and the hihats are boring. Try getting a new drum pack.

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Good job here!

Great song, mate. Kinda trippy, and very melodic. \o\

NemesisTheory responds:

Glad you liked it mate. :)

Great work, man!

The whole song is awesome, and it's your best track. You still need to get a better drum pack, but that's ok.

9/10
5/5
<3

Needs better beats.

The rythm is nice, but the beats are way too boring. Try new combinations, fills and a better kick.

DJsohlinyin responds:

I really wish I can add more stuff to the song, but the software I am using right now is very limited.... once I bought a new keyboard and FL.....then I would starts to compose real dance song. Thx for listening and giving comments.

Pro.

Even though it's made from a cliché vocal (Kate is everywhere...), you made it sound really amazing. Congrats, man.

TMM43: You can get the vocals for free at VipZone's page, inside the free downloads.

PrEmoEffect responds:

Thanks, that means alot to me... i was a little skeptical on whether to use kate lesing, because i know everyone uses it. :D

I LOVE THIS SONG!!!!

Dude. This song just kick asses. Need better dancing beats and more synths, though.

Great!

I've never heard the original song, but yours is just awesome! Just try making the synths a little lower in the complete version, as the beats kinda disappear in the middle of the song.

9/10
5/5

Great song, poor beats.

You need a new beat pack, dude. Unfortunately, your sucks =(
Try making the beats louder and more interesting, as they get boring really quick...

newrounds1 responds:

yea it sucks :P but thx for thinking the song is great :D

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