ErikPaladin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Dream of the Future]

This is really good!

A very soothing music. I think it would fit well in a game. Well done!

[[Trance Mix 4 g-R]]

Hard Trance ftw!

I love hardtrance and harddance, speacially when they are well done. And that's the case of this track. Awesome!

10/10
5/5
<3

[Dancer=)]

Good...

But you need a better drumset. Those FPC drums suck in dance songs!
Plus, you should make your songs less repetitive.

7/10
4/5

Yourz-Truly responds:

this was made when i first got my new program so i dident have much to work with so i might do another remix soon

[.:Arabic Desert:.]

Great!

That's what newgrounds needs: intelligent and well made submitions. This music could easily be the main track of any good game or movie. Congrats!

10/10
5/5
<3

neoloconick responds:

ty so much I'm glad u guys like it ^^ I just got bored of techno and trance so i just messed around and made this one.

[´Kriz: Reaching For You]

Well, this is great!

The only bigger problem is that the music's start is too hard. You should use the background pad you used in the in the beggining to create a proper intro.

Raving to the max!
9/10
5/5
<3

Kr1z responds:

ah well, i like a fast start :)
thx for the review ^^

["In Your Heart" F-777]

Deep Trance Master!

You did a great job here. The song is just beautiful, and I think some vocals would be just awesome there.

10/10
5/5 - automatic, lol
<3

F-777 responds:

Maybe i can make a sequel next year with vocals and the whole bit.

Thanks for the suggestion and review!

[[A-X]Flowing Tunes]

Good...

but you to improve some points:
1- Distortion: the kicks just ruin the most part of the song, because they have too much distortion. Try keeping the db meter below 0, dude!

2- Transitions: your transitions were too hard. Try making 'em subtler.

3- Synths: they are a little boring... you should use better ones...

4- Bass: where is it???

7/10
4/5
\o

[trance 1]

You need more samples...

1- You used the same arpeggiator during the whole song.
2- You used the same FX during the whole song.
3- You used the same beat line and sound during the whole song.

beans-r-tasty1 responds:

im still workin with the program gimme soem time

[*Trance, The Great Number 7!..]

Good

But you need more samples... you used only three or two synths throughout the whole song... try downloading samples packs, or z3ta +.

[((- Cronical -))]

This is not DnB...

I wouldn't classify this as DnB...

Toxinhead responds:

Yer i tried